I've been working on this chart for awhile that has to do with my
comic. It supposed to explain some large events that happened in the
story via time travel. I could really use some more sets of eyes on
this thing, because it's driving me crazy!
It's also an exercise in information design for me, so it's not
just for fun. It's my first real attempt at info design in fact.
Anyway, I'd like to see if people can make heads or tails of it
without any explanation from me. I would love any comments, pro or
con. The info I'd give you is that the story takes place on Mars,
"Geborga" are Martian scientists and John and Lian are astronauts
that arrive later.
The design - colors, fonts, I still consider somewhat rough. I'm
trying to get the layout nailed first.